In 1986 our band Erotic Exotic put out our first record called “Take Me As I Am”. Within the freestyle market the song did very well, and actually saw the top 10 spot on billboard’s dance chart. Every now & then someone will ask me “what are you singing in the last part of the chorus”? The reason they ask is because that line is very long considering it’s only 1 bar long. The chorus goes like this: (each line is a bar).
Come on baby take me as I am,
Come on baby.
Come on baby take me as I am
Or don’t even take me at all girl.
As you can see the fourth line which sings the same as the second is way longer, so you have to rush the words together. This is something that within the craft of songwriting is a no-no, but freestyle music was more about the beat and the hook, and none of us really had any technical songwriting knowledge at the time. Fortunately the song worked as it was.
